i bought some duck & some feet
& i ordered a coca cola!
it's delicious!
& i want justin to know
he is loved
but he's such a shithead
when he listens
to ghosts
that tell him nobody cares!
i'm eating
this food
that looks & tastes
like a candy egg
& chicken feet
are little bones
surrounded
by skin!
this poem sucks so bad i should delete it but i'm not going to :-/
ReplyDeleteit's just like
boring
like i was trying too hard
which is weird cuz when i was writing it i didn't feel at all like i was trying
i don't know, i feel strangely about this poem
maybe i just edited it like shit, maybe the unedited much longer version is okay
but seriously fuck this poem, I HATE IT, and i rarely hate the things i write, at least the things i put some amount of effort into
i dunno
i like leaving up the poems i hate, maybe kind of how they would leave treasonous heads on spikes outside of cities in renaissance times
ReplyDeletei think maybe the exclamation points are annoying you (?) but i liked them b/c it was a birthday poem and i always get that "forced exclamation points" feeling on bday; so successful translation of my bday feelings at least
this poem is hysterical never delete it
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